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Anna Podedworna
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Concept artist @ CD Projekt RED / Warsaw, Poland
Hey guys,

Since we finally reached the last page of Volume I of "Off-white" and announced updates of existing pages I though it would be a good idea to post the schedule of how we are planing to go about it. We'll be  starting chronologically from the first chapter. There’re around 100 pages that are going to be redone completely since we find both their art and writing not up to our current standards. Hopefully this list will make things less confusing:

Cover - stays the way it is.
Prologue - nothing changes

Chapter I cover
- updated
Pages 1-17 - intro scene - they will be redone and rewritten, the part with Raigho telling Iki about spirits will be expanded
Pages 18-22 - Albert and Seven introduction - expanded and rewritten, the goal is to make it less of an exposition dump

Chapter II cover - will be repainted but we would like to keep the general composition
Pages 23 -26 - art will be improved but layouts stay more or less the same
Pages 27-28 - this scene will be expanded and repainted
Pages 29-31 - reorganized totally
Pages 32-33- stays more or less the same, some art and dialogues tweaks
Pages 34-38 - just no, it's way too naive, must be rewritten
Pages 39-41 - one page will be added and art redone
Pages 43-58 - will be redone and rewritten, definitely needs more character development 

Chapter III cover - will be repainted
Pages 59-82 - will be repainted but not rewritten - only minor dialogue fixes
Pages 83-85 - slightly reorganized and improved

Chapter IV cover - this cover will be repainted  with a different character since Hati doesn't appear in this chapter
Pages 86-92 - improved and reorganized
Pages 93-120 - only minor art and dialogue fixes - around this place art and writing gets "acceptable"
Pages 121-139 - only minor color and anatomy tweaks

Chapter V cover - stays
Pages 141-151 - we are happy with those pages so we won't change them
Pages 152-173 - some color tweaks to make the light more consistent 
Pages 174-285 - those pages will stay the way they are

All the old pages will be gradually moved to this folder --> OLD PAGES ARCHIVE. So no worries, nothing will be lost or deleted forever.

So that's more or less what we're planing to occupy ourselves with for the next few months. If you have any suggestions - any particular scene or dialogue that have been bothering you - now it's the perfect time to let us know! We would love to hear your input :)

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Intu-Therian Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
I would love to watch your work on youtube, to see how you actually do the pages from scratch. Is that something that you're able to , or potentially considering because I'm sure others will be interested too.
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rainfox88 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015
Hey there Akreon! You guys did amazing on the first book to Off White! I can't wait for more! I was checking in to see how my commission was doing and that I may have another one ready for you! Thanks! :)
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Laefiticat Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015
Akreon, can you please upload the old, deleted off-white pages on the off-white.eu I'd love to see the progress and the changes you made, when the new updated version is released. Love your work so much! 
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Darkstar9 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Will the old and the old old off-white pages be available to view somewhere?
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SpiritWolf2468 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for favouriting and featuring my artwork: spiritwolf2468.deviantart.com/…
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