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:iconcopperrein:
I'm diggin it. It looks like one of those solar-print kits you toss leaves and feather on, expose to the sun, then wash in the kitchen sink. It has an ancient 'treasure map/plans to the underground city' feel as well.

I would have brought out a *tiny* bit more highlight on the main trunk...just a wee bit, something to move the eye around. There's very little movement of the eye. Once you get into the work, the eye finds all sorts of wee details to devour, but it takes some effort to get there.

I like the slight asymmetry to the tree, it reminds me of the natural bonzai in japan
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First off I like the colors and the technique you used. I'm not actually quite sure what medium you used for this; you never said in the description, so it might be kinda hard for me to write a critique for this BUT ANYWAY...

I'm gonna state the sugary-sweet stuff nobody likes first. As I was saying, I do like the colors and technique. The stratched type texture fits the tree quality of it and the itty-bitty thing of a background whatever you wanna call it.

But something bugs me. There is alot of foliage to the left side of the tree, and they don't seem to be connected to any branches. I'm also confused about some of the branches because you can't even tell where they're connected to. The branches I'm talking about are mostly located at the top. If you wanted to make excessive foliage, atleast provide a source for it. Also, it's kinda unbelievable that there would be so much sagging out to the side; makes the tree seem unbalanced and likely to fall over on one side :lol:

Other than that you did a good job, while some branches appear to be a bit toowhite. An in my opinion, I would cut off the usage of white in the little branches and a little white in the leaves, so that the viewer won't be so distracted and will look at the tree as a whole.

That's it for my critique, as always feel free to point out anything that I was wrong about.
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:iconnarutofreak123:
Interesting concept. ^^

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wow ^^ it's with e pen ? O.o

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this is awsome! i love the how its all twisted around and stuff we used to have a tree like that in our yard

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:iconthedarkbillabong:
...That is so GREAT....i love the sketchyness of it
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How would you put it in a pot????

but, hey, its still awesome :)

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:iconwolfies73:
omg... it is the border that you drew ? ( just please,I not received the drawing in my email :) )

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awesome :D i love how it branches out into the smaller area's it looks really good :clap:

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Aye, an interesting concept indeed, and very well done.

Beautiful piece.

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:iconfoxydj:
very interesting and done in pen i could never do it with a pen cus i all make mistake *cries* anyway love the draw well done

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