Oh well, I finally stop pussying and decide to write a critique...
and all of a sudden DeviantArt has just made me know there's no chance for non membership payers to give critique, but I don't give a dam, here goes mine after all! >8D
Ever since it's a color study, I rescue the good use of cold (mostly) harmonies for building up an ambient from still sketchy paint daubs.
The first panel's bottom has a more rationalized use of a brush stroke, such as found in cezanne's post impressionist paintings, and maybe I'd keep it all around the frame, to maintain a same grammar in the stroke, it gives the pic more consistency and makes it less confusing.
Now I love the light management in the last 3 panels, the few, the best-- small strokes, low levels of detail, but it keeps the small frames still fresh enough for the eye, so they could even look good as for a background concept art~
In the general of the frames, allow me to say that if you invented the landscapes, they're (specially last 3 ones, i must insist) really close to an actual place, and the colors are fantastic, still believable and pleasant to the eye.
Very good work overall~ *and off the routine, I really like many of your drawings and work here*
*hope it helped ;w; wrote it just because you beg for critiques, even though I've had few practice on serious University painting which i don't even upload xD*
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I finally stop pussying and decide to write a critique...
and all of a sudden DeviantArt has just made me know there's no chance for non membership payers to give critique, but I don't give a dam, here goes mine after all! >8D
Ever since it's a color study, I rescue the good use of cold (mostly) harmonies for building up an ambient from still sketchy paint daubs.
The first panel's bottom has a more rationalized use of a brush stroke, such as found in cezanne's post impressionist paintings, and maybe I'd keep it all around the frame, to maintain a same grammar in the stroke, it gives the pic more consistency and makes it less confusing.
Now I love the light management in the last 3 panels, the few, the best-- small strokes, low levels of detail, but it keeps the small frames still fresh enough for the eye, so they could even look good as for a background concept art~
In the general of the frames, allow me to say that if you invented the landscapes, they're (specially last 3 ones, i must insist) really close to an actual place, and the colors are fantastic, still believable and pleasant to the eye.
Very good work overall~
*hope it helped ;w; wrote it just because you beg for critiques, even though I've had few practice on serious University painting which i don't even upload xD*
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I like how the first one's made up of squares.
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