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December 9, 2009
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:iconwolfofdesire:
Pretty

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:iconkittycantdance:
Your drawings are awesome :)

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:iconk-taru:
Oh well,
I finally stop pussying and decide to write a critique...

and all of a sudden DeviantArt has just made me know there's no chance for non membership payers to give critique, but I don't give a dam, here goes mine after all! >8D


Ever since it's a color study, I rescue the good use of cold (mostly) harmonies for building up an ambient from still sketchy paint daubs.

The first panel's bottom has a more rationalized use of a brush stroke, such as found in cezanne's post impressionist paintings, and maybe I'd keep it all around the frame, to maintain a same grammar in the stroke, it gives the pic more consistency and makes it less confusing.

Now I love the light management in the last 3 panels, the few, the best-- small strokes, low levels of detail, but it keeps the small frames still fresh enough for the eye, so they could even look good as for a background concept art~

In the general of the frames, allow me to say that if you invented the landscapes, they're (specially last 3 ones, i must insist) really close to an actual place, and the colors are fantastic, still believable and pleasant to the eye.

Very good work overall~ :meow: *and off the routine, I really like many of your drawings and work here*

*hope it helped ;w; wrote it just because you beg for critiques, even though I've had few practice on serious University painting which i don't even upload xD*
:iconakemi-rei:
Ohhh~ I love the colour spotty thing (I've long forgotten what it's called). It's very pretty.

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:iconblack-platinum:
Ooo, that's pretty. I love the blueness. ^^

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:iconrae-j:
Pretty!

I like how the first one's made up of squares.
:iconstormyhotwolf88:
I wish I could study more. Gotta get my project out of the way first though..

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:iconscribalwriter:
I love the slightly abstract feel, and how many wonderful details comes through beyond that. They're wonderful study pieces. :heart:
:iconlistrata:
I love the complements of Purple/Yellow and the Blue/Orange. Very lovely.
:icondarkwaters134:
you better at backgrounds than me...thats mostly why i lov it ...inspiering(typo)

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