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Critique by HeartofIcewind Jul 26, 2010, 7:04:43 PM
How do you think of these? :XD: Very clever! I love how her hair curls up like phone wires! This piece is so charmingly retro. I see you went with the gear theme again too, it's still very neat. My eyes were drawn to the gear bracelet and the detail put into them. Her expression is so curious and almost naive. Another thing that struck me as particularly peculiar is how the phone wires wrapped around her and gradually fade into shadows, you did it in a subtle enough way that you pass it off as quite believable! Again, I couldn't pick out much of anything that needs work because your work is really so unique that it can't be corrected. I'm not sure if it's because of your intentional styling, but I feel like in comparison to the rest of her perhaps the dress bottom of her should be blended a bit more as it spreads out and fades. Judging from the light source, i think the shading should be on the other side of her right arm, and perhaps there should be a little more detail on the gears on her chest unless you did that on purpose to draw attention to the dial. All in all another great piece! I look forward to more from you!
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iluvmyleobaby Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
:) Wow. I love how the wires wrapped around her fade into the background
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omer88 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
great coloring
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Down-a-Rabbit-Hole Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Student Filmographer
wow
thats so true to the title and i love the way shes wrapped in phone cords
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amaguard Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student General Artist
I really love this! The emotion really flows out of it. Your coloring really added so much life to this. Really interesting illustration. Keep up the good work!
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sonELForever Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
I love it~~~
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pezfish26 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student General Artist
wow, incredible work!
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Water-Wolf Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student General Artist
talk about getting tied up in a phone call XD
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pendarron Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
Definitely pretty. You have glorious shading beneath the skirt of phone wires. I can't wait to see your next bit of art. It dazzles.
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SteelFangs Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student Digital Artist
i love the vintage look to this and the theme is striking. :heart:
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Valhalrion Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student Filmographer
:D cool!
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