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Submitted: July 26, 2010
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Critique by !HeartofIcewind Jul 26, 2010, 7:04:43 PM

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Very clever! I love how her hair curls up like phone wires! This piece is so charmingly retro. I see you went with the gear theme again too, it's still very neat. My eyes were drawn to the gear bracelet and the detail put into them. Her expression is so curious and almost naive. Another thing that struck me as particularly peculiar is how the phone wires wrapped around her and gradually fade into shadows, you did it in a subtle enough way that you pass it off as quite believable! Again, I couldn't pick out much of anything that needs work because your work is really so unique that it can't be corrected. I'm not sure if it's because of your intentional styling, but I feel like in comparison to the rest of her perhaps the dress bottom of her should be blended a bit more as it spreads out and fades. Judging from the light source, i think the shading should be on the other side of her right arm, and perhaps there should be a little more detail on the gears on her chest unless you did that on purpose to draw attention to the dial. All in all another great piece! I look forward to more from you!

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~iluvmyleobaby Aug 17, 2010

Wow. I love how the wires wrapped around her fade into the background

~omer88 Jul 31, 2010

great coloring

*Down-a-Rabbit-Hole Jul 28, 2010 Student Filmographer

wow
thats so true to the title and i love the way shes wrapped in phone cords

~amaguard Jul 27, 2010 Student General Artist

I really love this! The emotion really flows out of it. Your coloring really added so much life to this. Really interesting illustration. Keep up the good work!