I like the concept for a sculpture: A simple shape in the middle of a forest or on top of a mountain... ^^ It makes a contrast with the context. The subject doesn't detache that much from the background as if it was there for a lonng time. Even thought it is in the forest it looks futuristic.
It makes me think of the ''Garden of imagination'' in Terrasson in which there is a simple copper shape that guide visitors through the wood.
The forest is dam good by the way! I'm trying to get a good at representing vegetation, (since i'm a landscape architect to be) and yours is not monospecific and it feels great!
I'm not interested in spamming my watchers with critiques, so I will post mine here in the comments instead, and hope that you get it and that you won't mind my round-about ways.
I always marvel at how you can see improvement to your previous work with every new piece you submit. I've been in love with the way you paint smooth surfaces for a long time, and this is certainly not an exception. I can't place much critique on the structure itself, aside from the fact that the greens on it seem to have been relatively poorly defined. Moss and grass, or strange alien slime oozing out of the cracks in it? I unfortunately cannot tell.
What really takes away from this piece is the background and the way the eye moves. Your eyes first move to the top corner of the picture and follow the structure down to the ground. Ok. I can live with that. What bothers me is the log and the dark area below the tree. Not only is it positioned right next to the brightest part of the piece, your gaze actually directly LED there by following the log and the motion of the stone. I simply feel that the attention could have stayed on the marble, the really INTERESTING part, if the darker area had 1. been lightened, 2. been reduced in size and 3. if the details on the entire tree were brought down a notch to match the rest of the piece.
Over all, a pleasure to look at. I kind of want this as an oil painting and hang it over my TV now.. would be much more interesting to stare at for 20 minutes, that's for certain.
The subject doesn't detache that much from the background as if it was there for a lonng time. Even thought it is in the forest it looks futuristic.
It makes me think of the ''Garden of imagination'' in Terrasson in which there is a simple copper shape that guide visitors through the wood.
The forest is dam good by the way! I'm trying to get a good at representing vegetation, (since i'm a landscape architect to be) and yours is not monospecific and it feels great!
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