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off-white pg04 REDO by *akreon:iconakreon:

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©2009 *akreon
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Hey guys we decide to redo the beginning of "Off-white". The opening scene got rewrite and redrawn. We added 5 pages and delete 3 old ones which we felt weren't good enough to stay.

Another important thing. We redesign Raigho's face markings. Here is the new ref



Some of you may remember part of them were made online on livestream. Thanks to all of you who have watched us and sorry for the limited space. Hopefully next time we will have a registered channel.

our official website --> www.off-white.eu

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Art and characters by Anna Podedworna and Katarzyna Redesiuk
(:iconakreon: & :icontanathe: )
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~Plmko55555 Oct 10, 2009, 7:59:01 AM
Hehe I like her parenting style :heart:

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~FeketeHold Oct 10, 2009, 7:59:11 AM
awseomr pictures!!! :D
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*TwilighthawkTaini Oct 10, 2009, 7:59:21 AM
XD

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*iKeilidh Oct 10, 2009, 7:59:40 AM
LMFAO AHAHAHA.

Jera reminds me of my mother in the last panel.

Genius, you two. I love the new opening for the comic. xD

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~Rockpup5 Oct 10, 2009, 8:00:36 AM
:lmao: but her parenting style is greatly amusing!

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*Charanty Oct 10, 2009, 8:00:38 AM
I think she isn't going to change her parenting strategy :rofl:
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~Upthendown Oct 10, 2009, 8:02:37 AM
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oh, but we all adore her parenting ways!
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*LadyAsheh Oct 10, 2009, 8:03:15 AM
Lmfao. I love Raigho's expression XD. Jera's is very humorous as well.

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*Kaylink Oct 10, 2009, 8:03:28 AM
Haha, this page gave me a good laugh. Jera's such an amusing character.

If you wouldn't mind a bit of dialogue crit though, Jera's last sentence "The least what we need now is for you to catch a cold" sounds pretty awkward, since you normally wouldn't use "least" as the noun in the sentence. Changing it to "the last thing we need right now is for you to catch a cold" is much smoother and easier to understand.

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