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off-white pg05 REDO by *akreon:iconakreon:

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Art and characters by Anna Podedworna and Katarzyna Redesiuk
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~Plmko55555 Oct 10, 2009, 8:10:20 AM
Aww!
Don't worry Iki, you will one day :heart:

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*HeartofIcewind Oct 10, 2009, 8:10:28 AM
oh yay another one! XD Iki is soo cute!! <3 and the third panel is AWESOME

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*Kaylink Oct 10, 2009, 8:11:02 AM
Your redo-pages are definitely a big improvement from the old ones, that's for sure. Iki's facial expressions are great.

Another dialogue crit though, it should be "caught," not "catched" ;)

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~NightmarePantheramon Oct 10, 2009, 8:11:19 AM
Haha I love Iki and Jera :XD: "BLAH!" = EPIC.

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*xAshleyMx Oct 10, 2009, 8:11:40 AM
Iki is such a loveable chap. I love Isa's and Fehu's expression in the last panel.
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*lupehero38 Oct 10, 2009, 8:11:53 AM
Aw, poor Iki. xD
He looks so cute in the second panel. <3 :+fav:

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*iKeilidh Oct 10, 2009, 8:12:03 AM
I still flipping love the new opening. xD It's really great. It gives them a lot of character.

I love Iki's expressions. From happy to disappointed.

One thing though, it should be "I haven't caught any." However, I'm wondering if "catched" was on purpose? No one speaks with perfect English after all, and it'd be kinda cute to have Iki talk like that on purpose. Or maybe "I haven't caughted any."

He seems like a kinda clueless character after all. xD

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*FerianMoon Oct 10, 2009, 8:12:49 AM
Oh my god his expression at 'I've been hunting lemmings' is PRECIOUS

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~Raedio Oct 10, 2009, 8:13:28 AM
I think Iki was meant to say catched - it deliberate, makes him much cuter.

I love the new pages, I was worried I wouldn't be fond of the new style but I love it. great job C
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~Lurking-Phantom Oct 10, 2009, 8:13:44 AM
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