this page made me hungry i love deer meat.T.T i dont have any though and no one wil give me some...*goes off to mope abot wanting deer jerky and burgers and other tasty things you can only make with deer meat*
i love the last two panels! there's just something reallyy artful and beautiful about them. i like the way you can see the wolf looking up from different angles. it gives a sense of animation and creativity. Great work! keep it up!
I'll be honest, I have become quite fond of these comics, with their dynamic story and engaging charachters. your natural style of the wolves is really beautiful. I hope this isn't irritating, but I have to say it; in the second panel, when Iki and Jera are facing off, the brown wolf (Gebo, right?) has a great expression and pose, but i think the little animae sweatdrop to show nervousness is a little superfluous. it doesn't really add to the image, you can already tell that Gebo wants to keep the peace and is nervous about their ongoing conflict, but the little white droplet is just so flat and out of style, I don't know...I don't want to seem nit-picky or overly criticizing, but I'm just trying to help, that's all. please don't be offended. I really do love these comics, I look forward to new ones all the time