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twilight WIP by *akreon:iconakreon:

Categories Anthro > Digital Media > Drawings

©2008-2009 *akreon
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as it is written in the title it is work in progress, something is not right with it, and for the time being i couldn't figure out what's wrong and where >.< grrrrr

EDIT: I would like to thank you all for your really constructive and helpful comments! ^^ I think I know what I have to change thanks to you guys! :glomp:

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~tiarnaaaaaa Dec 10, 2008, 2:13:22 AM
Stunning, your style is amazing :)

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~Khiljon Dec 10, 2008, 2:18:44 AM
whoa that's awesome! if that's a wip, I'm looking forward to the finished one, but it's already great!
nice done as always :)

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*firefoxessmoon Dec 10, 2008, 2:19:53 AM
This is soooo cool!

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~Ocean-Kitsune Dec 10, 2008, 2:24:52 AM
It's either that black smude which i think is a horse or the sky?

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*bloodhound-omega Dec 10, 2008, 2:45:28 AM
Hmm... I might be mistaken, but something seems off with the horse. I am not sure wether we are supposed to see it from behind and it's turning its head sideways or if it is a profile. In both cases though the anatomy/ perspective seems a bit odd.

Dunno of that helps. o.o

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~Chrisabell Dec 10, 2008, 3:10:27 AM
Hmm. The only things I see that could use a good tweak is the withers are a bit high and the neck needs a bit more legnth.. BUT I LOVE this piccy. Very tranquil and serene

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=rift-warden Dec 10, 2008, 3:22:46 AM
i think it is gorgeous, even if unfinished...
the only thing i can say is it has no absolute highlights, the character and the background are about the same intensity, but it's not necessarily a problem...

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~nyra350 Dec 10, 2008, 4:26:52 AM
I think the wing on the horse is too far up its neck. Because it's such a large wing, it throws of the the horse's perspective. It should be down a bit lower, more on its back.

Unless of course, you meant to draw it like that. Then, don't change a thing because the rest of the picture is wonderful!

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~Ryuco-The-Dog-Demon Dec 10, 2008, 4:36:42 AM
I think its awesome the way it is ^^ good work! love it

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~N-Baka Dec 10, 2008, 6:09:42 AM
Excellently!

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