Off-white update schedule

Since we finally reached the last page of Volume I of "Off-white" and announced updates of existing pages I though it would be a good idea to post the schedule of how we are planing to go about it. We'll be  starting chronologically from the first chapter. There’re around 100 pages that are going to be redone completely since we find both their art and writing not up to our current standards. Hopefully this list will make things less confusing:

Cover - stays the way it is.
Prologue - nothing changes

Chapter I cover - updated
Pages 1-17 - intro scene - they will be redone and rewritten, the part with Raigho telling Iki about spirits will be expanded
Pages 18-22 - Albert and Seven introduction - expanded and rewritten, the goal is to make it less of an exposition dump

Chapter II cover - will be repainted but we would like to keep the general composition
Pages 23 -26 - art will be improved but layouts stay more or less the same
Pages 27-28 - this scene will be expanded and repainted
Pages 29-31 - reorganized totally
Pages 32-33- stays more or less the same, some art and dialogues tweaks
Pages 34-38 - just no, it's way too naive, must be rewritten
Pages 39-41 - one page will be added and art redone
Pages 43-58 - will be redone and rewritten, definitely needs more character development 

Chapter III cover - will be repainted
Pages 59-82 - will be repainted but not rewritten - only minor dialogue fixes
Pages 83-85 - slightly reorganized and improved

Chapter IV cover - this cover will be repainted  with a different character since Hati doesn't appear in this chapter
Pages 86-92 - improved and reorganized
Pages 93-120 - only minor art and dialogue fixes - around this place art and writing gets "acceptable"
Pages 121-139 - only minor color and anatomy tweaks

Chapter V cover - stays
Pages 141-151 - we are happy with those pages so we won't change them
Pages 152-173 - some color tweaks to make the light more consistent 
Pages 174-285 - those pages will stay the way they are

All the old pages will be gradually moved to this folder --> OLD PAGES ARCHIVE. So no worries, nothing will be lost or deleted forever.

So that's more or less what we're planing to occupy ourselves with for the next few months. If you have any suggestions - any particular scene or dialogue that have been bothering you - now it's the perfect time to let us know! We would love to hear your input